Thank you to those of you who responded to yesterday’s query re which version worked best. 5 of you said you preferred version 1 (“social distance”), 7 of you preferred version 2 (“these days…”), and 1 voted for both. I appreciate your thoughtful replies! I’m leaning toward version 2 myself. But that might change 6 months from now. Editing is an ongoing process.

brightening sky

the perfect last line

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