26 January 2020 (scoters)
Kristen Lindquist
high seas
disappearing :: reappearing
surf scoters
In the haiku class I’m teaching now, we discussed the potential use of a double colon. Kala Ramesh says,
“The double colon is there to create an unweighted pause. A pause in the breath, a pause in thought. A pause that is different than the weighted or directional relationship our standard punctuation indicates. And that is also different than a hard line break. The two sides of the thought-pause may exist in harmony or in ambiguity.... ”